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작성자 : dai***   ·   2015-09-01

1.important=My homework is very important.

2.peer=I have a peer and she is sou-yun she is my best friend.

3.belive=I can belive my family.

4.leader=Our home's leader is my mom and dad.

5.wise=My dad is veery wise.

답변

           1.important=My homework is very important.

2.peer=I have a peer and she is sou-yun she is my best friend.

3.belive=I can belive my family.

4.leader=Our home's leader is my mom and dad.

5.wise=My dad is veery wise

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CORRECTION:

1. Important = My homework is very important. (correct)

2. Peer = Sou-yun, my best friend, is one of my peers.

3. Believe = I can believe in my family.

4. Leader = Our home's leaders are my mom and dad.

5. Wise = My dad is very wise.


POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:

1. Spelling

2. Use of Plural nouns and verbs

3. Use of Preposition

4. Choice of words


Thank you for doing your homework Daine! Good job! :)

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