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Rosie's homework

작성자 : ros***   ·   2015-08-31

Why do you prefer to live in a urban area?
I perfer it beacause there are many bugs in a rural area.Also, the houses is very old.And there are many farms so ther are many birds.(beacause i don't like birds much)That is why i perfer to live in a urban area.

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Why do you prefer to live in a urban area?
> Why do you prefer to live in an urban area?

I perfer it beacause there are many bugs in a rural area.Also, the houses is very old.And there are many farms so ther are many birds.(beacause i don't like birds much)That is why i perfer to live in a urban area.

> I prefer it because there are many bugs in a rural area. Also the houses are very old. And, there are many farms so there are many birds. I don't like birds much. That is why I prefer to live in an urban area.


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~Thank you for doing your homework, Rosie. Keep up the good work and don't forget to take note of your corrections and the things that you need to review. See you in our next class. ^^


*Teacher Cassie


 

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