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작성자 : hj0***   ·   2015-08-28

I went to a christmas party that happens once a year.
My friends threw the party.
I was dying to go there.
But we didn't go bananas.

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CORRECTION/S:

I went to a Christmas party that happens once a year.

My friends threw the party.
I was dying to go there but we didn't go bananas.

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* Capitalization
* Sentence completion
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