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Endangered animals

작성자 : tho***   ·   2015-08-27

In the past, people hunted animals to eat and feed their family. So there were no animals extinct because of human. But these days, people started to hunt animal for fun. Actually, in the middle age, kings enjoyed hunting animals. But this is not a main problem. Developing technology is one of the main causes. People cut down the forests and made them into city, airports,and farmland. So animals have no habitats to live. For example, a white island sparrow extinct because human cut down their woods and made it in to airport.
People should regret there fault and take care of animals. It's no to late.

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In the past, people hunted animals to eat and feed their familes. So there were no animals extinct because of human. But these days, people started to hunt animal for fun. Actually, in the middle age, kings enjoyed hunting animals. But this is not a the main problem. Developing technology is one of the main causes. People cut down the forests and made turn them into cities, airports, and farmlands. So animals have no lose their natural habitats to live. For example, white island sparrows became extinct because humans cut down their trees for wood and made it in to build airports.
People should regret there their faults and take care of animals. It's no too late.

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