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작성자 : sen***   ·   2015-08-27

My favorite day is saturday. Because i can play online game, no homework and i can play much.
My least favorite day is monday. Because i have to stay in shcool for 6 hours, i have many homework and i can't go to taekwondo.

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My favorite day is Saturday because I can play online games and there's no homework so I can play much.
My least favorite day is Monday because I have to stay in school for 6 hours, I have much homework and I can't go to Taekwondo.

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