My Favorite Dream I was sitting on a swing, watching the sunset slowly falling.The autumn leaves fall down, I with its voice to sing.And then night fell,I came back my house.In the house, I heard my favorite symphony.I entered the house that I followed the pace of music.At this moment,someone knocked at my door. I opened the door and saw a familiar face. But I have to face the tears. He said his name, but I was not impressed. I went back to the 'I don't know you', and then closed the door.Then continue to listen to the music.When the music is over, I suddenly think of that person.I know I want to find him,but I cannot to find out.Because I was weak up.
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My Favorite Dream
I was sitting on a swing, watching the sun slowly setting. The autumn leaves were falling down, (?) and as the night fall, I came back to my house. At home, I heard my favorite symphony. I entered the house as I followed the pace of the music. At this moment, someone knocked on my door. I opened the door and saw a familiar face, but I had to face the tears. He said his name, but I was not impressed. I went back to the 'I don't know you' phase, and then closed the door. I continued to listen to the music after. When the music was over, I suddenly thought of that person. I knew I wanted to find him, but before I could, I woke up.