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작성자 : ryu***   ·   2015-08-25

My favorite season is fall.
In fall, the weather is so nice and the wind blows softly.
Also I can eat many kinds of fruits because it is harvest time.
I like chestnut very much.
The best reason that I like fall is because of beautiful clothes.
I can wear cardigan, coat and long sleeves.
I'm so sad because fall is getting shorter.
Bad global warming:(

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CORRECTION/S:

My favorite season is fall.
In fall, the weather is so nice and the wind blows softly.
Also, I can eat many kinds of fruits because it is harvest time.
I like chestnuts very much.
The best main reason that why I like fall is because of the beautiful clothes.
I can wear cardigans, coats, and long sleeves.
I'm so sad because autumn is getting shorter very short.
Bad global warming :(


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