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작성자 : kok***   ·   2015-08-22

The prince meet an old woman and she begged to help her.
The prince promise to help her but he did not keep it.
The old woman was a witch and he become to beast!
The merchant travelled far and he want to go to home but it raining.
So he found a very clean dry home and he sleep there.
Next morning he dig up the rose because he promise with her daughter.
And beast get very angry.because it is beast's house garden.
merchant came home and told to bella she must go to beast house because he is promise with beast send his one daughter.
Bella is like beast and she know he is kind animal. she use magic mirror and go to home. But she promise return to the beast.
She want to see the beast and she saw the mirror, but she saw the beast was ill.
she stepped the mirror and go to the beast and kiss to the beast,
He go to the beast and they living happily foreer~

답변

The prince met an old woman, and she begged him to help her.
The prince promised to help her but he did not keep it.
The old woman was a witch and she become turned him to a beast!
The merchant travelled far. and He wanted to go to home, but it was raining.
So he found looked for a very clean and dry home place and he to sleep there.
Next morning, he dug up the rose because he promised that to with her daughter.
And The Beast got very angry because it is beast's his house garden.
The merchant came home and told to her daughter, Belle, that
she must go to the beast house because he is promised with the Beast that he will be sending one of his one daughters.
Belle is likes the Beast and even if
she knows he is kind like an animal. She uses the magic mirror and go to take her back home. But, she promised to return to the Beast.
She wanted to see the Beast and so she saw looked at the mirror, but. She saw that the Beast was ill.
She stepped out of the mirror and go went to the Beast and kissed him. to the beast,
He go to the Belle and the Beast and they live happily ever afterforeer~


Take note of the following:
*Subject-Verb agreement
*Choice of words
*Capitalization of proper Nouns

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