While I am living in China, I realized only Koreans are going to academy to study English, math, and etc. So Koreans are better than most of others solving math problems. Yes, it???s good thing to do like that but, we are getting tired or studying. I heard that in other countries like Italy, and USA students don???t have any stress studying and they don???t suicide because of the pressure of education. It was frustrating to hear some Chinese teachers say we-Korean students-are poor studying every subject to get a good grade. So, I want to change the way of educating like western countries-not forcing to memorize multiplication table or to solve problems without knowing why we have to. People say Koreans are ???smart??? (maybe not) but people rarely get Novel prize. Why?-Because we don???t-can???t understand why we have to solve it- like western children knowing the purpose of doing it. Then, we can???t ask the question ???why???? to ourselves. I don???t want people in Koreans to struggle to get a good grade- grade isn???t everything in life. Not to struggle, we need to change our attitude of choosing the ???way??? of educating.

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While I am living in China, I realized only Koreans are going to academyies to study English, Math, and etc. So Koreans are better than most of others when it comes to solving math problems. Yes, it???s a good thing to do be like that but, we are getting tired orf studying. I heard that in other countries like Italy and the USA, students don???t have any stress to deal with when studying and they don???t commit suicide because of the pressure of education. It was frustrating to hear some Chinese teachers say that we, Korean students, are poor over studying each subject to get a good grades. So, I want to change the way of educating like western countries not forcing to memorize multiplication table or to solve problems without knowing why we have to. People say Koreans are ???smart???, (maybe not) but people we rarely get a Novel Prize. Why? Because we don???t, and can???t understand why we have to solve it like Western children knowing the purpose of doing it. Then, we can???t ask the question ???why???? to ourselves. I don???t want people in Koreans to struggle to get a good grades. Grade isn???t everything in life. Not to struggle, we need to change our attitude of choosing the ???way??? of educating.

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