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작성자 : sen***   ·   2015-08-20

I like hambergers.
Becaus it is tastier than snadwitches.
If i made hambergers,i want to put mashmalou.

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CORRECTION/S:

I like hamburgers b
ecause they are tastier than sandwiches. 
If I will make hamburgers, I want to put marshmallows

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