In some novels, some characters are very patient; patient in many ways-they don?t get upset or become excited, or sad easily by others? words. They look very cool! But not me, I get upset if others say bad things, and I cannot be patient. If I don?t react to them, they?ll stop teasing me, but I still react though I know it isn?t a practical way to halt them. It?s nonsense why I can?t remain quietly, maybe my temper isn?t that good or kind-hearted. If I can change my characteristic in some way I want to lower my temper ?not being servile- in a way I can ignore ridiculing people. Thus, if I can, I want to be little-sly-tricky-crafty, so I can hide my real face behind ?mask? so no one can know my thoughts or feeling easily. I hope that I can be like this in the future. Strangely, to be conflict to this, I think I still want to remain like this, maybe?

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In some novels, some characters are very patient; patient in many ways-they don?t get upset or become excited, or sad easily by others? words. They look very cool! But not me, I get upset if others say bad things, and I cannot be patient. If I don?t react to them, they?ll stop teasing me, but I still react though I know it isn?t a practical way to halt them. It?s nonsense why I can?t remain quietly, maybe my temper isn?t that good or kind-hearted. If I can change my characteristic in some way I want to lower my temper ?not being servile- in a way I can ignore ridiculing people. Thus, if I can, I want to be little-sly-tricky-crafty, so I can hide my real face behind ?mask? my true feelings behind the mask so no one can would know what I am feeling. my thoughts or feeling easily. I hope that I can be like this in the future. Strangely, to be conflict to this, I think I still want to remain like this, maybe?

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