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작성자 : oof***   ·   2015-08-18

yesterday I play in sister room but I sleep and I can't wake up because I was fast asleep and my mom turn off the light after morning I wake up and my sister sad get out of my room so I get buck to my room after we get on the car and sister cep saying yesterday story but like 30 mins later she getting better.

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yesterday I play in sister room but I sleep and I can't wake up because I was fast asleep and my mom turn off the light after morning I wake up and my sister sad get out of my room so I get buck to my room after we get on the car and sister cep saying yesterday story but like 30 mins later she getting better.


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Yesterday, I played in?my?sister's room, but then I fell asleep. and I can't wake up because I was fast asleep and would not wake up because my mom turned off the lights after morning. I wake When I woke up, and my sister said "get out of my room!" so I get went buck back to my room. after When we get on got?in the car, and my sister cep?saying talked about yesterday's story, but like 30 mins later she getting better. She had calmed down after 30 minutes.



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