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작성자 : sal*** · 2015-08-17
What is your favorite dessert?Why?
My favorite dessert is ice cream.
Because it have many flaqvor or taste.
I can pick it what i want.
The price is cheep. Ice cream is very cheep to buy.
This is the answer of "what is your favorite dessert?why"
My favorite dessert is ice cream.
Because it have many flaqvor or taste.
I can pick it what i want.
The price is cheep. Ice cream is very cheep to buy.
This is the answer of "what is your favorite dessert?why"
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CORRECTION/S:
I can pick what I want. Also, ice cream is very cheap. This is my answer to the question: "What is your favorite dessert? Why?".
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