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작성자 : epr*** · 2015-08-17
1. When I play soccer, I am so excited.
2. When I watch TV, I am joyful.
3. When I perfect on test, teacher said good.
4. When I excied, my mom said calm down.
5. I am carefree, because my parents care me.
2. When I watch TV, I am joyful.
3. When I perfect on test, teacher said good.
4. When I excied, my mom said calm down.
5. I am carefree, because my parents care me.
답변
1. When I play soccer, I am so excited.
2. When I watch TV, I am joyful.
3. When I perfect on test, teacher said good.
~> When I got a perfect score on a test, my teacher says "Good".
4. When I excied, my mom said calm down.
~> When I'm so excited, my mom says, "Calm down".
5. I am carefree, because my parents care me.
~> I am carefree, because my parents take care of me.
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