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작성자 : epr***   ·   2015-08-17

1. When I play soccer, I am so excited.
2. When I watch TV, I am joyful.
3. When I perfect on test, teacher said good.
4. When I excied, my mom said calm down.
5. I am carefree, because my parents care me.

답변

1. When I play soccer, I am so excited.

2. When I watch TV, I am joyful.

3. When I perfect on test, teacher said good.
~> When I got a perfect score on a test, my teacher says "Good".

4. When I excied, my mom said calm down.
~>  When I'm so excited, my mom says, "Calm down".

5. I am carefree, because my parents care me.
~> I am carefree, because my parents take care of me.

Thank you for doing your homework. Please check my corrections above. Happy Monday!

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