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Homework(why do you prepare something for your parents when they are celebrating their birthday?

작성자 : man***   ·   2015-08-17

Because the parents care of me and my sister.
And they loves me and my sister
And he help sister and my life.

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Because the parents care of me and my sister.
~> Because our parents take care of me and my sister.

And they loves me and my sister And he help sister and my life.
~> Also, they love us and help us to have a better life.

Thank you for doing your homework. Please check my corrections above. Happy Monday!



 

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