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homework(France teacher)
작성자 : epr*** · 2015-08-14
My favorite day of the week is Sunday.
Because On Saturday, I did homework and Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday is go to school and institutes.
So I like Sunday.
Because On Saturday, I did homework and Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday is go to school and institutes.
So I like Sunday.
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CORRECTION/S:
Because I do my homework on Saturdays.
I go to school and institutes on weekdays.
So I like Sunday.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
* Sentence construction
* Capitalization
* Choice of words
HAPPY FRIDAY!