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작성자 : wjd***   ·   2015-08-14

There was a person called[?] Tom who whanted to hire
carpenter. Tom whanted to keep it as a secret but
carpenters discoverd it.
So carpenters rushed to Tom and Tom hired carpenter.

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CORRECTION/S:

There was a person called Tom who wanted to hire a 
carpenter. Tom wanted to keep it as a secret but the carpenters discovered it. So the carpenters rushed to Tom and he hired them.

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