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작성자 : cho*** · 2015-08-12
-People buy goods.
-There are crops in the farm.
-Customers are people who buy goods.
-Producers make goods.
-I purchased a soccerball.
-If I buy a pencil,I am a consumer.
-we can see travel agents commonly in the airport.
-producer produces goods.
-producers get profit.
-pecilcase costs about 3000won.
-There are crops in the farm.
-Customers are people who buy goods.
-Producers make goods.
-I purchased a soccerball.
-If I buy a pencil,I am a consumer.
-we can see travel agents commonly in the airport.
-producer produces goods.
-producers get profit.
-pecilcase costs about 3000won.
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CORRECTION/S:
- There are crops in the farm.
- Customers are people who buy goods.
- Producers make the goods.
- I purchased a soccer ball.
- If I buy a pencil, I will become a consumer.
- We can see travel agents commonly at the airport.
- Producers produce goods.
- Producers get the profit.
- A pencil case costs about 3000 won.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
* Sentence construction
* Proper spacing
* Singular and Plural nouns
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