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작성자 : ryu*** · 2015-08-11
I went to church camp last Wednesday.
We played in the water for 3~4 hours.
Teachers threw me into the water and tryed to drown me - just for fun:)
I was so surprised at first. I tried to drown other friends right after that, however.
We had a lot of fun and laughed a lot.
After that, we had recreation time.
During recreation time, we played lots of games.
For example, we played 99seconds game. It is accomplishing some missions like 'win rock paper scissors 3time!' , 'kick the ball 5times without dropping!' , 'whistle after eating chocolate pie' in regular order in 99seconds.
It was so funny and excited.
We did many activities and had a barbecue party.
I was so happy while i playing with my friends in camp!
We played in the water for 3~4 hours.
Teachers threw me into the water and tryed to drown me - just for fun:)
I was so surprised at first. I tried to drown other friends right after that, however.
We had a lot of fun and laughed a lot.
After that, we had recreation time.
During recreation time, we played lots of games.
For example, we played 99seconds game. It is accomplishing some missions like 'win rock paper scissors 3time!' , 'kick the ball 5times without dropping!' , 'whistle after eating chocolate pie' in regular order in 99seconds.
It was so funny and excited.
We did many activities and had a barbecue party.
I was so happy while i playing with my friends in camp!
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I went to church camp last Wednesday.
We played in the water for 3~4 hours.
Teachers threw me into the water and tryed to drown me - just for fun:)
I was so surprised at first. I tried to drown other friends right after that, however.
We had a lot of fun and laughed a lot.
After that, we had recreation time.
During recreation time, we played lots of games.
For example, we played 99seconds game. It is accomplishing some missions like 'win rock paper scissors 3time!' , 'kick the ball 5times without dropping!' , 'whistle after eating chocolate pie' in regular order in 99seconds.
It was so funny and excited.
We did many activities and had a barbecue party.
I was so happy while i playing with my friends in camp!
We played in the water for 3~4 hours.
Teachers threw me into the water and tryed to drown me - just for fun:)
I was so surprised at first. I tried to drown other friends right after that, however.
We had a lot of fun and laughed a lot.
After that, we had recreation time.
During recreation time, we played lots of games.
For example, we played 99seconds game. It is accomplishing some missions like 'win rock paper scissors 3time!' , 'kick the ball 5times without dropping!' , 'whistle after eating chocolate pie' in regular order in 99seconds.
It was so funny and excited.
We did many activities and had a barbecue party.
I was so happy while i playing with my friends in camp!
Correct:
I went to a church camp last Wednesday. We played in the water for 3~4 hours.Teachers threw me into the water and tryed tried to drown me - just for fun :) I was so surprised at first. I tried to drown other friends right after that, however.We had a lot of fun and laughed a lot. We laughed a lot, and had so much fun. After that, we had recreation time. During recreation time, we played lots of games. For example, we played 99 seconds game. It is accomplishing some missions like 'win rock paper scissors 3 times!' , 'kick the ball 5 times without dropping!' , 'whistle after eating chocolate pie' in regular order in 99 seconds. It was so funny and excited exciting. We did many activities and had a barbecue party. I was so happy while I was playing with my friends in the camp!
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Happy Wednesday! 