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작성자 : kwa***   ·   2015-08-11

I think learning English helps us a lot in our lives. First, we can use English in other countries, because a lot of them were the colonies of USA. Also, if you want to go to other countries to study, English will be one of the essential things you need to prepare. Thus, to get jobs in big companies, there would be more chances to be selected if you can speak more than one language. Yes, English helps us a lot but I think we need to learn third language from now on because speaking both mother tongue and English won’t be that surprising thing in the future.

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I think learning English helps us a lot in our lives. First, we can use English in other countries, because a lot of them were the colonies of USA. Also, if you want to go to other countries to study, English will be one of the essential things you need to prepare. Thus, to get jobs in big companies, there would be more chances to be selected if you can speak more than one language. Yes, English helps us a lot but I think we need to learn third language from now on because speaking both mother tongue and English won't be that surprising thing in the future.

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I think learning English helps us a lot in our lives. First, we can use English in other countries, because a lot of them were the colonies of the USA. Also, if you want to go to other countries to study, English will be one of the essential things you need to prepare. Thus, to get jobs in big companies, there would be more chances to be selected if you can speak more than one language. Yes, English helps us a lot but I think we need to learn a third language from now on because speaking both mother tongue and English won't be that surprising thing in the future.

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