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homework(France teacher)
작성자 : epr*** · 2015-08-11
1. My favorite food is icecream.
Because it is sweet, cool and very delicious.
2. My favorite food is banana.
Because it is smooth and sweet.
3. My favorite food is cheese.
Because it is salty.
4. My favorite food is pizza.
Because it has many flavors.
5. My favorite food is steake.
Because it is warm.
Because it is sweet, cool and very delicious.
2. My favorite food is banana.
Because it is smooth and sweet.
3. My favorite food is cheese.
Because it is salty.
4. My favorite food is pizza.
Because it has many flavors.
5. My favorite food is steake.
Because it is warm.
답변
CORRECTION/S:
Ice cream because it is sweet, cool and very delicious.
Banana, because it is smooth and sweet.
Cheese, because it is salty.
Pizza, because it has many different flavors.
And steak because it is warm.
Cheese, because it is salty.
Pizza, because it has many different flavors.
And steak because it is warm.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
* Sentence construction
* Proper spacing
* Redundancy
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