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작성자 : jiw***   ·   2015-08-07

The happiest time in my school life is when I went to school trip with my friends. I could feel freindship more than usual day and we ate cup ramen(noodle) in accomodation secretly. Also I missed my house during the trip, but sometimes I depended on my friends, so I could overcome the homesickness. And now, I get along with them in the fun school life.

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The happiest time in my school life is when I went to a school trip with my friends. I could feel the friendship that time more than the usual days and we ate a cup of ramen(noodles) in the bus secretly. Also, I missed my home during the trip, but sometimes I could depend on my friends, so I could overcome the homesickness. Now, I get along with them with a fun school life.

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