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작성자 : hsj*** · 2015-08-05
Money can't buy happiness. But If I am poor, I can't feel happy.
So I think I have to have proper amount of money.I don't have to have
a lot of money.I want just normal life, not rich.
So I think I have to have proper amount of money.I don't have to have
a lot of money.I want just normal life, not rich.
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CORRECTION/S:
So I think I have to have enough amount of money. I don't have to have
a lot of money. I just want a normal life, it doesn't matter if I'm rich.
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