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Can you check my grammar in these sentences?
작성자 : smp*** · 2015-08-04
1. I don't think so. I thingk we should have started this earlier.
2. I think it is hard to learn korean language for foreigners, because there are 2 types of language which is normal language and formal language in korean.
3. I think that is good for them right now, because they have problems. It will help them to be a stronger country.
4. There is Kyeongbok Palace in Korea, it is korean tourists attraction from Choson Dynasty.
5.I will sign up for dining network, because i like eating foods with many people.
6. I think that Coca cola is strong in the market because of the sugar in the carbonated drink.
2. I think it is hard to learn korean language for foreigners, because there are 2 types of language which is normal language and formal language in korean.
3. I think that is good for them right now, because they have problems. It will help them to be a stronger country.
4. There is Kyeongbok Palace in Korea, it is korean tourists attraction from Choson Dynasty.
5.I will sign up for dining network, because i like eating foods with many people.
6. I think that Coca cola is strong in the market because of the sugar in the carbonated drink.
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CORRECTION/S:
2. I think it is difficult for foreigners to learn the Korean language, because there are 2 types of speaking it: the casual way and the formal way.
3. I think that it is good for them right now that they have problems. It will help them be a stronger country.
4. There is Kyeongbok Palace in Korea, it is a Korean tourist attraction from Choson Dynasty.
5.I will sign up for a dining network, because I like eating food with many people.
6. I think that Coca Cola is strong in the market because of the sugar in the carbonated drink.
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