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Sally
작성자 : khy*** · 2015-08-03
My summer vacation plan
1. I will go to my grandmother's house again.
2. I will go to warter park with my familly.
3. I will go to downtown with my friends for shopping.
4. I will study some subject at home.
5. I will do a talkfun.
6. I will effort to stop my skin trouble.
7. I will exercise beacause of my weight.
8. I will play with my sisters.
9. I will meet special man.
10. I will do a vacation homework.
-Beacause i don't know how many i must write this sentence,
so i write ten sentence about my summer vacation plan.
1. I will go to my grandmother's house again.
2. I will go to warter park with my familly.
3. I will go to downtown with my friends for shopping.
4. I will study some subject at home.
5. I will do a talkfun.
6. I will effort to stop my skin trouble.
7. I will exercise beacause of my weight.
8. I will play with my sisters.
9. I will meet special man.
10. I will do a vacation homework.
-Beacause i don't know how many i must write this sentence,
so i write ten sentence about my summer vacation plan.
답변
1. I will go to my grandmother's house again.
2. I will go to a water park with my familly.
3. I will go to downtown with my friends to shop.
4. I will study some subjects at home.
5. I will continue to take online English classes in Talkfun.
6. I will do something to improve my complexion
7. I will exercise to lose weight.
8. I will play with my sisters.
9. I will meet a special man.
10. I will do a vacation homework.
Note:
*go + downtown (not go to downtown)
*complexion - the color and appearance of the skin
*to lose weight = to reduce weight
*Don't say do a talkfun. Simply say
Sally, thank you for submitting your homework! :) Take note of the corrections made in your homework.