- 토크펀 로그인
로그인
회원가입 시 다양한 혜택과 서비스를 이용하실 수 있습니다.
학습방
원어민 일대일 맞춤 회화 수업 토크펀! 영어 정복의 꿈을 이루세요!
영작문첨삭
homework
작성자 : hsj*** · 2015-07-31
I want to travel Europe.
My friends told me that Europe is very good country and beutiful.
Also in TV program, Unusual conference, I heard about Italy.
I think there a lot of beutiful place.
So I want to go.
My friends told me that Europe is very good country and beutiful.
Also in TV program, Unusual conference, I heard about Italy.
I think there a lot of beutiful place.
So I want to go.
답변
CORRECTION/S:
I think there are a lot of beautiful places in Europe, that's why I want to go there.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
* Sentence construction
* Prepositions
* Spelling
* Choice of words
* Sentence completion
HAPPY MONDAY! DID YOU HAVE A GOOD WEEKEND? TELL ME ABOUT IT IN OUR CLASS! SEE YOU THEN~