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작성자 : ryu*** · 2015-07-30
My teacher confiscated my phone
He violated the rule
He didn't want to escape punishment
He violated the rule
He didn't want to escape punishment
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CORRECTION/S:
He violated the rule.
He didn't want to escape the punishment.
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