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작성자 : hj0*** · 2015-07-29
Hi, Mike. You are a senior citizen now.
You better get in shape.
You better work out.
I want to be fit as a fiddle.
When i get in shape, everyone will not believe their eyes.
You better get in shape.
You better work out.
I want to be fit as a fiddle.
When i get in shape, everyone will not believe their eyes.
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CORRECTION/S:
You better get in shape.
You better work out.
I want to be fit as a fiddle.
When I get in shape, everyone will not believe their eyes.
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