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작성자 : hsj*** · 2015-07-29
1. If I'm tired, I just sleep for about 30 minutes.
After I sleep, It's much better.
2. I eat lots of food.It makes me happy.
3. I drink some ice water. It wake up my mental.
After I sleep, It's much better.
2. I eat lots of food.It makes me happy.
3. I drink some ice water. It wake up my mental.
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CORRECTION/S:
When I wake up, I feel much better.
2. I eat lots of food, it makes me happy.
3. I drink some iced water, it helps jump start my brain.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
* Sentence construction
* Choice of words
HAPPY THURSDAY!