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작성자 : kok***   ·   2015-07-30

My house is not very gorgeous but itis cute and small.
I love my house and my sweetroom.
My younger photo is very dusty but,it is my first treasure.
next week is my birthday and my family and I are have a party at my house.
And I will watch a musical too.I think I deserve a present because it is my birthday. I wait next week!!!

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My house is not very gorgeous. It's small but it's cute.
I love my house and my sweet room.
My photo when I was younger is very dusty, but it is my first treasure.
Next week is my birthday and my family and I are going to have a party at our house. And I will watch a musical too. I think I deserve a present because it is my birthday. I can't wait for next week!!!

Happy Birthday in advance, Alice!
The best gift to have on your birthday is to be with your family. Also, you may never know, they might give you a special present. Just wait and see.

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