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elsa

작성자 : bes***   ·   2015-07-28

I go to pharmacy. This ice cream sweet. I don't don't know lettuce and set up.

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I go to pharmacy.

Correct: I will go to a pharmacy.


This ice cream sweet.

Correct: This is a sweet ice cream.


 I don't don't know lettuce and set up.

Correct: I don't know the word 'lettuce' and 'set up.'


Explanation:

1. Always remember proper verb tenses.

2. Word order: Always arrange your ideas accordingly.

3. Don't use some words redundantly.


COMMENT:

Thank you so much for sending me your work. I am very glad that you're trying your best to make an effort to make correct sentences. Keep it up!

-Teacher Joanna

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