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작성자 : kwa***   ·   2015-07-23

The best restaurant in my life was the one in Incheon Airport. I went there to take airplane and visit Europe so I could have a chance to eat ‘original’ Korean food. Korean food in China was changed to make it suitable for both Koreans and Chinese. Thus, It was long time no eat. So at that time I was missing the real one. I ordered bibimbab and it was super good, and the side dishes were wonderful too! My mom also thought that those were good. We finished them in the twinkle of an eye. You might not understand why I am so happy to eat Korean food which I can also eat-the home-made dishes, but the place is different! I was eating in China one day ago night but at that time, I was eating in Korea. And it tastes different (or does it?). For these reasons-the ones you cannot understand unless you experience it-the restaurant in Incheon airport was the best!

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This is a very good composition, Min! I can feel that excitement you had when you got the chance to finally eat authentic Korean food that you really missed. I have to commend how you organize your thoughts. Excellent!


Here are just a few corrections:

Thus, It was long time no eat. So at that time I was missing the real one.
>>Thus, it was "long time, no eat." So, at that time, I was missing the real one.

You might not understand why I am so happy to eat Korean food which I can also eat-the home-made dishes, but the place is different!
>>You might not understand why I am so happy to eat Korean food when I can also eat home-made dishes, but the place where you eat it is different!

I was eating in China one day ago night but at that time, I was eating in Korea.
>>I was eating in China the day before. But at that time, I was eating in Korea.

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