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작성자 : gae*** · 2015-07-22
My homework: Write an English eassy.
Homework:
I reall feel proud when I work hard and get some money for the work. I think that's because I really like that feeling. Now I'm going to talk about the time that I worked really hard to get something.
I really worked hard to get my week pocket money. That's because I don't get my week pocket money very much. I only get's 1000 won for the week. I think you would think that's big enogh, but it's not. I think it's really a small money to have for week. I worked hard at hangging the laundry. for every day. And every week, every month.( Maby you think I am very poor, but I'm just making it to be poor. So don't think other way.) I really has to save money if I want to buy things at stationery. So I think I work harder to save some money.
So I worked really hard to get money. I worked hard at hagging laundrys. But still, I really have to save money.
Homework:
I reall feel proud when I work hard and get some money for the work. I think that's because I really like that feeling. Now I'm going to talk about the time that I worked really hard to get something.
I really worked hard to get my week pocket money. That's because I don't get my week pocket money very much. I only get's 1000 won for the week. I think you would think that's big enogh, but it's not. I think it's really a small money to have for week. I worked hard at hangging the laundry. for every day. And every week, every month.( Maby you think I am very poor, but I'm just making it to be poor. So don't think other way.) I really has to save money if I want to buy things at stationery. So I think I work harder to save some money.
So I worked really hard to get money. I worked hard at hagging laundrys. But still, I really have to save money.
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My homework: Write an English essay.
Homework:
I really feel proud when I work hard and get some money out of it. I think that's because I really like that feeling. Now I'm going to talk about the time that I worked really hard to get something.
I really worked hard to get my weekly pocket money. That's because I don't get enough weekly pocket money. I only get 1000 won a week. I think you would think that's big enough, but it's not. I think it's really a small money to have for a week. I worked hard hanging the laundry every day, every week, and every month.( Maybe you think I am very poor, but I'm just making it difficult for yourself. So don't think like that.) I really have to save money if I want to buy stationeries. So I think I work harder to save some money.
So I worked really hard to get money. I worked hard hanging the laundry. But still, I really have to save money.
Homework:
I really feel proud when I work hard and get some money out of it. I think that's because I really like that feeling. Now I'm going to talk about the time that I worked really hard to get something.
I really worked hard to get my weekly pocket money. That's because I don't get enough weekly pocket money. I only get 1000 won a week. I think you would think that's big enough, but it's not. I think it's really a small money to have for a week. I worked hard hanging the laundry every day, every week, and every month.( Maybe you think I am very poor, but I'm just making it difficult for yourself. So don't think like that.) I really have to save money if I want to buy stationeries. So I think I work harder to save some money.
So I worked really hard to get money. I worked hard hanging the laundry. But still, I really have to save money.