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작성자 : dh2*** · 2015-07-16
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1)looking and touch birds , It's looks so disgusting.
2)I don't like hot weather , If the weather is hot i feel angry.
3) I don't like studying some subject , It's hard to do that.
4)I don't like lots way of my body , It's looks not pretty.
5) I don't like doing an announcement , It's shy to do that.
1)looking and touch birds , It's looks so disgusting.
2)I don't like hot weather , If the weather is hot i feel angry.
3) I don't like studying some subject , It's hard to do that.
4)I don't like lots way of my body , It's looks not pretty.
5) I don't like doing an announcement , It's shy to do that.
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CORRECTION/S:
1) Looking and touching birds is so disgusting.
2) I don't like hot weather, if the weather is hot I feel angry.
3) I don't like studying some subjects, it's hard to do so.
4) I don't like a lot of things about my body, it doesn't look pretty.
5) I don't like doing an announcement, I feel shy to do that.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
* Word choice
* Sentence construction
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