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If I compare myself to a thing...
작성자 : dav*** · 2015-07-15
If I compare myself to a thing I would compare myself as a computer. the reason is that first, I know somthing more than my friends. second, like an computer error, sometimes I think slower than ever but sometimes I think faster than ever.
third, I almost always answer the questions people ask me. And that`s it! This three reasons make me compared as a computer. THE END
third, I almost always answer the questions people ask me. And that`s it! This three reasons make me compared as a computer. THE END
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CORRECTION/S:
If I will compare myself to a thing, I would compare myself to a computer. These are the reason,
First, I know something more than my friends.
Second, like a computer error, sometimes I think slower than ever but sometimes I think faster than ever.
Third/Lastly, I almost always answer any questions people ask me. And that`s it!
These three reasons make me comparable to a computer. THE END.
First, I know something more than my friends.
Second, like a computer error, sometimes I think slower than ever but sometimes I think faster than ever.
Third/Lastly, I almost always answer any questions people ask me. And that`s it!
These three reasons make me comparable to a computer. THE END.
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