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학습방

My favorite seasen is spring.
Beacause spring is not hot,and not cold.
So I can play outside.
So, I like spring.

CORRECTION/S:

My favorite season is spring because the temperature is not hot nor cold.
So I can play outside. That's why I like spring.

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