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작성자 : joo*** · 2015-07-10
Nam gang river story.
When Japan invaded Korea, Jin Ju had also suffered occupation.
Women who had suffered sexual harassment in the JinJu to Japanese soldiers caught. Among them was a woman named Nongae suicide jump in Nam gang river hugging the soldiers lift.
When Japan invaded Korea, Jin Ju had also suffered occupation.
Women who had suffered sexual harassment in the JinJu to Japanese soldiers caught. Among them was a woman named Nongae suicide jump in Nam gang river hugging the soldiers lift.
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When Japan invaded Korea, Jin Ju had also suffered occupation. Women in Jin Ju who had suffered sexual harassment from the Japanese soldiers were caught. Among them was a woman named Nongae, she committed suicide by jumping in the Namgang river hugging the soldiers' lift.
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