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작성자 : gae*** · 2015-07-03
My homework: Write an English Eassay.
Homework:
< Water is important to all living things. Doyou agree or disagree?>
I really like to drink waters. Because water tastes good and makes us healthy.
And I feel great afer I drink water.
I agree that water is important to allliving things. abaecause all living things nees water ro live. like plants, they need water to grow. And animals need water to be healthy. And to our humans, we all need water to live Because in our body, there is 70 % of water. I't more than half of our body. So if there are no enogh water in our body, we might die. Snd that's for all living things, too. Plants need water to grow. If there are not enogh water, they will die. And animals, they all needs water to live and grow. If there are no enogh water in there body, they will die. And fishs. They all need water to live because they have differnt breath sistems. I f the fish are not in the water, they cannot breath and probley, die.
So all of these resons, all living things needs water to live so I agree that the water is imoritant to all living things.
Homework:
< Water is important to all living things. Doyou agree or disagree?>
I really like to drink waters. Because water tastes good and makes us healthy.
And I feel great afer I drink water.
I agree that water is important to allliving things. abaecause all living things nees water ro live. like plants, they need water to grow. And animals need water to be healthy. And to our humans, we all need water to live Because in our body, there is 70 % of water. I't more than half of our body. So if there are no enogh water in our body, we might die. Snd that's for all living things, too. Plants need water to grow. If there are not enogh water, they will die. And animals, they all needs water to live and grow. If there are no enogh water in there body, they will die. And fishs. They all need water to live because they have differnt breath sistems. I f the fish are not in the water, they cannot breath and probley, die.
So all of these resons, all living things needs water to live so I agree that the water is imoritant to all living things.
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My homework: Write an English Essay.
Homework:
< Water is important to all living things. Do you agree or disagree?>
I really like to drink water. Because water tastes good and it makes us healthy.
Homework:
< Water is important to all living things. Do you agree or disagree?>
I really like to drink water. Because water tastes good and it makes us healthy.
I feel great after I drink water.I agree that water is important to all living things because all living things needs water to live. Like plants, they need water to grow, animals need water to be healthy and for us humans too.
We all need water to live because in our body, there are 70% of water. Its more than half of our body. So if there's no enough water in our body, we might die. And that's for all living things, too.Plants need water to grow. If there's no enough water, they will die. And animals, they all needs water to live and grow. If there are no enough water in there body, they will die. And fish. They all need water to live because they have different breathing systems. I f the fish are not in the water, they cannot breath and probably die. So these are all the reasons why all living things needs water to live so I agree that the water is important to all living things.