I want to go to Canada in North America.Because I want to eat maple syrup in snow.
I saw it in Caillou DVD.And I want to see the maple leaves.
Also it is a large land.And I want to see polar bears, buffaloes, beavers and bighorn sheep.
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Because I want to eat maple syrup in snow.
Correction: I want to go to Canada in North America because I want to taste maple syrup in snow.
Explanation: You cannot start a sentence with the word because so it is better to connect both sentences.
Taste could be a more appropriate word to use because basically, you cannot eat the maple syrup.
And I want to see the maple leaves.
Correction: I want to see the maple leaves
Explanation: You cannot start your sentences with conjunctions such as for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so, because, etc.
Also it is a large land.
Correction: Canada is also a large land.
Explanation: Do not start your sentence with also and do not put it at the end of your sentence.
And I want to see polar bears, buffaloes, beavers and bighorn sheep.
Correction: I also want to see polar bears, buffaloes, beavers and bighorn sheep.
Explanation: You cannot start your sentence with and.
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