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Is celebrating birthday important?
작성자 : osj*** · 2015-06-30
I think celebrating birthday is important.
There are some reasons.
Frist, birthday is only one time in a year.
Second, birthday is a birth of one person.
So. I think celebrating birthday is important.
There are some reasons.
Frist, birthday is only one time in a year.
Second, birthday is a birth of one person.
So. I think celebrating birthday is important.
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>> I think celebrating birthday is important.
There are few reasons why.
First, birthdays only happen once a year.
Second, a birthday is to remember the birth of one person.
So, I think celebrating birthdays is important.
There are few reasons why.
First, birthdays only happen once a year.
Second, a birthday is to remember the birth of one person.
So, I think celebrating birthdays is important.
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