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작성자 : gae***   ·   2015-06-30

My homework: Write English eassay.

Homework:

<Talk about th importance of newspaper.>

I like to read some newspapers. Because they are really fun. And sometimes, seirious.
Newspapers are really important. Because they tell us what happend, and makes us be more smart. For example, the newspaper tells us what happend to the crimminal and what had people had decied and things. And also, they are fun. Sometimes, at nespaper, there is some games and puzzles and comics. They are really fun.
These are the reson why newspaper is very useful and important.

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<Talk about the importance of the newspaper.>

I like to read some newspapers.

Because it is very fun to read.

Sometimes it is serious.

Newspapers are really important.

Because they tell us what happend, and makes us smarter/wiser.

For example, the newspaper tells us what happend to the criminal and how did they decide about things.

 And also, they are fun.

<<Correct>> Sometimes, there are some games, puzzles and comics on the newspaper.

They are really fun.


 These are the reasons why newspaper is very useful and important.

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