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My homework
작성자 : gae*** · 2015-06-29
My homework: Write a diary. But, I have other homeworks. And I'm going to have those homeworks every day.
Homework:
1.
<Talk about the subject you consider most important.>
I'm going to write about the subject I consider most. I like gim class, Korean, Science, music, and Art.
I think Science and math are the most important subject. Because when people is good at science and math, they can get almost evry job they can get. And if ypou good at math, you can be good at Science, too. Like at science, you have to maesure the itams and mabey plus them togather or minus them togather.And if our science get's better, we culd live more comftuble. Like robot that helps us our works and things.
So I think sicence and math are the most important that I consider most.
2.
<Talk about the country you would like to visit.>
I'm going to write about the country I would like to visit. I went to canada, and U.S.A and Thailand. And I've went to Jeju, too.
I think I would like to visit North Korea. Because I've never been to North Korea and North Korea will never let me in to the North Korea to visit. And also, theres many amazing things at North Korea. Like the catle of Korea and things. And I would like to meet some poor peoples and give thim some cloths and things. And I want to hear North Korean.(South Korea and North Korea have kind of differnt langegeis.)
3.
<Why sould we have good maners?>
I'm going to write about 'why sould we have good maners?' I think I have good maners. Because if I meet someone in our apartmant elevator, I says "Hello!" (Not always. But mostly.)
I think good maners make every one happy. Like if someone is sitting next to me, and if that someonehas no maner, I think I'll kind of hate that someone.But if the someone has really noce maners, I think I will be happy sitting next to that somebody enen though I haven't meet that somebody. Like that, someone with very good manners makes the person happy. For exsmple, I went to a party and meet someone. An that person had really nice manners. So I felt happy thern.
Like this, Nice manners make other people makes feel great. I think that's the reason.
Homework:
1.
<Talk about the subject you consider most important.>
I'm going to write about the subject I consider most. I like gim class, Korean, Science, music, and Art.
I think Science and math are the most important subject. Because when people is good at science and math, they can get almost evry job they can get. And if ypou good at math, you can be good at Science, too. Like at science, you have to maesure the itams and mabey plus them togather or minus them togather.And if our science get's better, we culd live more comftuble. Like robot that helps us our works and things.
So I think sicence and math are the most important that I consider most.
2.
<Talk about the country you would like to visit.>
I'm going to write about the country I would like to visit. I went to canada, and U.S.A and Thailand. And I've went to Jeju, too.
I think I would like to visit North Korea. Because I've never been to North Korea and North Korea will never let me in to the North Korea to visit. And also, theres many amazing things at North Korea. Like the catle of Korea and things. And I would like to meet some poor peoples and give thim some cloths and things. And I want to hear North Korean.(South Korea and North Korea have kind of differnt langegeis.)
3.
<Why sould we have good maners?>
I'm going to write about 'why sould we have good maners?' I think I have good maners. Because if I meet someone in our apartmant elevator, I says "Hello!" (Not always. But mostly.)
I think good maners make every one happy. Like if someone is sitting next to me, and if that someonehas no maner, I think I'll kind of hate that someone.But if the someone has really noce maners, I think I will be happy sitting next to that somebody enen though I haven't meet that somebody. Like that, someone with very good manners makes the person happy. For exsmple, I went to a party and meet someone. An that person had really nice manners. So I felt happy thern.
Like this, Nice manners make other people makes feel great. I think that's the reason.
답변
Homework:
1.
<Talk about the subject you considered most important.>
I'm going to write about the subjects I consider most important. I like PE, Korean, Science, music, and Art.
I think Science and math are the most important subjects because when people are good at science and math, they can get almost every job they can get. Also, if you are good at math, you can be good at Science, too. For example, in science, you have to measure things and perhaps add or subtract them. And if science improves, we could live more comfortable. We can create robots that would help us with our work.
So I think science and math are the subjects which I consider most important.
2.
<Talk about the country you would like to visit.>
I'm going to write about the country I would like to visit. I have been to Canada, The U.S.A and Thailand. I've been to Jeju, too.
I think I would like to visit North Korea because I've never been there and North Korea will never let me enter their country. And also, there are many amazing things you can find in North Korea. Like the castle of Korea and many more. And I would like to meet the poor people there and give them some clothes and things. I also want to hear the North Korean language (South Korea and North Korea have different languages.).
3.
<Why should we have good manners?>
I'm going to write about 'why should we have good manners?' I think I have good manners because whenever I meet someone in our apartment elevator, I always say "Hello!" (Not always. But mostly.)
I think good manners make every one happy. Like if someone is sitting next to me, and if that someone has no manners, I think I'll kind of hate that someone. But if that someone has really nice manners, I think I will be happy sitting next to that somebody even though I haven't met that somebody. Like that, someone with very good manners makes people happy. For example, I went to a party and met someone. That person had really nice manners. So I felt happy.
Like this, nice manners make other people feel great. I think that's the reason.
1.
<Talk about the subject you considered most important.>
I'm going to write about the subjects I consider most important. I like PE, Korean, Science, music, and Art.
I think Science and math are the most important subjects because when people are good at science and math, they can get almost every job they can get. Also, if you are good at math, you can be good at Science, too. For example, in science, you have to measure things and perhaps add or subtract them. And if science improves, we could live more comfortable. We can create robots that would help us with our work.
So I think science and math are the subjects which I consider most important.
2.
<Talk about the country you would like to visit.>
I'm going to write about the country I would like to visit. I have been to Canada, The U.S.A and Thailand. I've been to Jeju, too.
I think I would like to visit North Korea because I've never been there and North Korea will never let me enter their country. And also, there are many amazing things you can find in North Korea. Like the castle of Korea and many more. And I would like to meet the poor people there and give them some clothes and things. I also want to hear the North Korean language (South Korea and North Korea have different languages.).
3.
<Why should we have good manners?>
I'm going to write about 'why should we have good manners?' I think I have good manners because whenever I meet someone in our apartment elevator, I always say "Hello!" (Not always. But mostly.)
I think good manners make every one happy. Like if someone is sitting next to me, and if that someone has no manners, I think I'll kind of hate that someone. But if that someone has really nice manners, I think I will be happy sitting next to that somebody even though I haven't met that somebody. Like that, someone with very good manners makes people happy. For example, I went to a party and met someone. That person had really nice manners. So I felt happy.
Like this, nice manners make other people feel great. I think that's the reason.