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작성자 : rub*** · 2015-06-26
Homework) Write an essay about your seatmate.
Seatmate is changed once a month. My homeroom teacher decides it. We have to
sit two by two with the same gender. Our class has thirteen girls, so they are
odd. Then one girl becomes to sit alone.
Mean while, Our class has twelve boys.
I had my seatmate until last month but this month I sit alone.
When I have my seatmates, She gives me a favor. Without her, I'm very
comfortable. So, I want to sit without seatmate continue.
Seatmate is changed once a month. My homeroom teacher decides it. We have to
sit two by two with the same gender. Our class has thirteen girls, so they are
odd. Then one girl becomes to sit alone.
Mean while, Our class has twelve boys.
I had my seatmate until last month but this month I sit alone.
When I have my seatmates, She gives me a favor. Without her, I'm very
comfortable. So, I want to sit without seatmate continue.
답변
(Homework) Write an essay about your seatmate.
My seatmate is changes once a month. My homeroom teacher decides who my seatmate will be. We have to sit side by side with someone from the same gender. Our class has thirteen girls, it's odd number. So one girl has to sit alone. Meanwhile, our class has twelve boys. I had a seatmate last month but this month I sit alone.When I had a seatmate, she gives me a favor. Without her, I'm very comfortable. So, I don't like having a seatmate.
My seatmate is changes once a month. My homeroom teacher decides who my seatmate will be. We have to sit side by side with someone from the same gender. Our class has thirteen girls, it's odd number. So one girl has to sit alone. Meanwhile, our class has twelve boys. I had a seatmate last month but this month I sit alone.When I had a seatmate, she gives me a favor. Without her, I'm very comfortable. So, I don't like having a seatmate.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
* Sentence construction
* Word choice