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Amusement park, heritage sites, or natural park; which are the most worth place to go?
I think it can be different by people's age or favorite things.If you are a child, you might like to go amusement park unless you are afraid of those or like to see trees and old-monuments. And if you want to get some very fresh air and be in quite place, you might choose to go to natural park. But to me, personally, I'd like to choose to go to natural park. I haven't gone to any of them, and I like to get some fresh air. The trees will be very grand and magnificent, it will be awesome to be there! There might be wild animals, I'd like to see them. I want to stay in fresh air which is coming from greenish-trees!

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Amusement park, heritage sites, or natural parks: which is the most worth visiting?
I think choices can be different according to people's age or favorite things. It you are a child, you might like to go amusement parks unless you are afraid of the rides or you like to see trees and old monuments. And, if you want to get some fresh air and be in a quiet place, you might choose to go to natural parks. But to me, personally, I'd like to go to natural parks. I haven't gone to any of them, and I like to get some fresh air. The trees will be very grand and magnificent. It will be awesome to be there! There might be wild animals, but I'd like to see them. I want to stay somewhere with fresh air which is coming from greenish trees!