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작성자 : gae*** · 2015-06-19
My homework: Write a dialog.
Homework:
Hannah and Sarah are talking.
Sarah: When are we going to arrive, anyway??
Hannah: We are near. only a half a mile to go.
Sarah: Only?
Hannah: Yes.Only an half mile.
Sarah: But Hannah, half mile is a long~~~~ way to go!!
Hannah: At first of this travel misson, we have to go thrty miles for thrty days!! We slept alone in the dark and cook, and everything!!
Sarah: But.... I'm really tired!! I can't go more.
Hannah: Yes, you can.
Sarah: I can't...
Hannah: Sarah Smith!! Can you please stop!?
Sarah: Hannah Smith!! stop!!
Hannah: You can't call me in full name!!
Sarah: Then you can't, too.
Hannah: I can call you in full name!! I'm a lot older then you!!
Sarah: It's not fair!!
Hannah: Yes, it's fair!! Now, where were we??
Sarah: U...m... Hannah?
Hannah: Now what??
Sarah: There's something over there...
Hannah: Uh-oh.
Sarah: What is that??
Hannah: It's a bear.
Sarah: A bear?? What is bear doing here??
Hannah: Shh!!
Sarah: (Now wispering) Okay...
After one moment the bear was gone.
And they went walking.
After a 20 minet's later...
Hannah: We are almost there!! Really!! Look!!
Sarah: A finish line!!
Hannah: Yes!! A finish line!!
Sarah: Oh, I'm really happy, I might burp!! but I'm really tired!!
Hannah: Me, too.
Sarah: Oh, look!! We are the first!!
Hannah: Really??
Sarah: Yes!!
Hannah: Oh, I can see it now!!
Sarah: Oh, I'm so happy!!
They arrived at the finsh line.
Hannah: Oh...( She was crying.)
Sarah: Oh...( She was crying, too.)
Homework:
Hannah and Sarah are talking.
Sarah: When are we going to arrive, anyway??
Hannah: We are near. only a half a mile to go.
Sarah: Only?
Hannah: Yes.Only an half mile.
Sarah: But Hannah, half mile is a long~~~~ way to go!!
Hannah: At first of this travel misson, we have to go thrty miles for thrty days!! We slept alone in the dark and cook, and everything!!
Sarah: But.... I'm really tired!! I can't go more.
Hannah: Yes, you can.
Sarah: I can't...
Hannah: Sarah Smith!! Can you please stop!?
Sarah: Hannah Smith!! stop!!
Hannah: You can't call me in full name!!
Sarah: Then you can't, too.
Hannah: I can call you in full name!! I'm a lot older then you!!
Sarah: It's not fair!!
Hannah: Yes, it's fair!! Now, where were we??
Sarah: U...m... Hannah?
Hannah: Now what??
Sarah: There's something over there...
Hannah: Uh-oh.
Sarah: What is that??
Hannah: It's a bear.
Sarah: A bear?? What is bear doing here??
Hannah: Shh!!
Sarah: (Now wispering) Okay...
After one moment the bear was gone.
And they went walking.
After a 20 minet's later...
Hannah: We are almost there!! Really!! Look!!
Sarah: A finish line!!
Hannah: Yes!! A finish line!!
Sarah: Oh, I'm really happy, I might burp!! but I'm really tired!!
Hannah: Me, too.
Sarah: Oh, look!! We are the first!!
Hannah: Really??
Sarah: Yes!!
Hannah: Oh, I can see it now!!
Sarah: Oh, I'm so happy!!
They arrived at the finsh line.
Hannah: Oh...( She was crying.)
Sarah: Oh...( She was crying, too.)
답변
>> My homework: Write a dialog.
Homework:
Hannah and Sarah are talking.
Sarah: When are we going to arrive, anyway?
Hannah: We are near. only a half mile to go.
Sarah: Only?
Hannah: Yes.Only a half mile.
Sarah: But Hannah, half mile is a long~~~~ way to go!!
Hannah: At the beginning of this travelling mission, we had to go for thirty miles in thirty days! We slept alone in the dark, we cooked, and everything!
Sarah: But.... I'm really tired! I can't go any further.
Hannah: Yes, you can.
Sarah: I can't...
Hannah: Sarah Smith! Can you please stop!?
Sarah: No, Hannah Smith! You stop!
Hannah: You can't call me in full name!
Sarah: Then you can't do it to me either.
Hannah: I can call you in your full name! I'm a lot older than you!!
Sarah: It's not fair!
Hannah: Yes, it's fair! Now, where were we??
Sarah: U...m... Hannah?
Hannah: Now what?
Sarah: There's something over there...
Hannah: Uh-oh.
Sarah: What is that?
Hannah: It's a bear.
Sarah: A bear?? What is a bear doing here?
Hannah: Shh!
Sarah: (Now whispering) Okay...
After one moment the bear was gone.
And they continued walking.
And 20 minute's later...
Hannah: We are almost there! Really! Look!
Sarah: The finish line!
Hannah: Yes! The finish line!
Sarah: Oh, I'm really happy, I might throw up! But I'm also really tired!
Hannah: Me, too.
Sarah: Oh, look! We are the first ones!
Hannah: Really??
Sarah: Yes!
Hannah: Oh, I can see it now!
Sarah: Oh, I'm so happy!
They arrived at the finish line.
Hannah: Oh...( She was crying.)
Sarah: Oh...( She was crying, too.)
Homework:
Hannah and Sarah are talking.
Sarah: When are we going to arrive, anyway?
Hannah: We are near. only a half mile to go.
Sarah: Only?
Hannah: Yes.Only a half mile.
Sarah: But Hannah, half mile is a long~~~~ way to go!!
Hannah: At the beginning of this travelling mission, we had to go for thirty miles in thirty days! We slept alone in the dark, we cooked, and everything!
Sarah: But.... I'm really tired! I can't go any further.
Hannah: Yes, you can.
Sarah: I can't...
Hannah: Sarah Smith! Can you please stop!?
Sarah: No, Hannah Smith! You stop!
Hannah: You can't call me in full name!
Sarah: Then you can't do it to me either.
Hannah: I can call you in your full name! I'm a lot older than you!!
Sarah: It's not fair!
Hannah: Yes, it's fair! Now, where were we??
Sarah: U...m... Hannah?
Hannah: Now what?
Sarah: There's something over there...
Hannah: Uh-oh.
Sarah: What is that?
Hannah: It's a bear.
Sarah: A bear?? What is a bear doing here?
Hannah: Shh!
Sarah: (Now whispering) Okay...
After one moment the bear was gone.
And they continued walking.
And 20 minute's later...
Hannah: We are almost there! Really! Look!
Sarah: The finish line!
Hannah: Yes! The finish line!
Sarah: Oh, I'm really happy, I might throw up! But I'm also really tired!
Hannah: Me, too.
Sarah: Oh, look! We are the first ones!
Hannah: Really??
Sarah: Yes!
Hannah: Oh, I can see it now!
Sarah: Oh, I'm so happy!
They arrived at the finish line.
Hannah: Oh...( She was crying.)
Sarah: Oh...( She was crying, too.)
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
* Spelling
* Word choice
* Punctuation
Happy Monday! Good luck to the both of us this week~ Work hard ^^