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elsa
작성자 : bes*** · 2015-06-18
My grandfather is old. My sister is cute younger. My father is taller . My father and uncle is stronger. My cousin is weak then my sister.
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My grandfather is old. My sister is cute younger. My father is taller . My father and uncle is stronger. My cousin is weak then my sister.
COMMENTS:
Hi, Elsa!
You are now getting better on making sentences. I can see that you're sentences are longer now compared before. Keep it up! See you later!
-Teacher Joanna
CORRECTIONS:
My grandfather is old. My younger sister is cute. My father is tall. My father and uncle are strong. My cousin is weaker than my sister.
My grandfather is old. My younger sister is cute. My father is tall. My father and uncle are strong. My cousin is weaker than my sister.
POINTS TO IMPROVE ON:
* Sentence construction
* Word choice
* Comparative form
* Subject - Verb agreement
COMMENTS:
Hi, Elsa!
You are now getting better on making sentences. I can see that you're sentences are longer now compared before. Keep it up! See you later!
-Teacher Joanna