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What are the importance of Water Cycle in our lives?
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1.Not Water Cycle,we can't eat anythings.
2.Not Water Cycle,we can't eat Ice.
3.Not Water Cycle,we can't eat tea.
Beacause not Water Cycle,not rain.
And not ice.
And not boil.
2.Not Water Cycle,we can't eat Ice.
3.Not Water Cycle,we can't eat tea.
Beacause not Water Cycle,not rain.
And not ice.
And not boil.
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1.Not Water Cycle,we can't eat anythings.
2.Not Water Cycle,we can't eat Ice.
3.Not Water Cycle,we can't eat tea.
Beacause not Water Cycle,not rain.
And not ice.
And not boil.
3. Without water cycle, there will be no tea.
Because without water cycle, it will not rain or snow, we cannot boil water either.
2.Not Water Cycle,we can't eat Ice.
3.Not Water Cycle,we can't eat tea.
Beacause not Water Cycle,not rain.
And not ice.
And not boil.
>> 1. Without water cycle, there will be no food.
2. Without water cycle, there will be no ice.3. Without water cycle, there will be no tea.
Because without water cycle, it will not rain or snow, we cannot boil water either.
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