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Juns Homework
작성자 : wls*** · 2015-06-12
1.unplug the plug.
2. do not use the electric fan instead use a paper fan.
3.after useing the electric thing's turn off.
4.if you'r cold go inside to the bed
5.if it's dark fire the candle
2. do not use the electric fan instead use a paper fan.
3.after useing the electric thing's turn off.
4.if you'r cold go inside to the bed
5.if it's dark fire the candle
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1.unplug the plug.
2. do not use the electric fan instead use a paper fan.
3.after useing the electric thing's turn off.
4.if you'r cold go inside to the bed
5.if it's dark fire the candle
2. do not use the electric fan instead use a paper fan.
3.after useing the electric thing's turn off.
4.if you'r cold go inside to the bed
5.if it's dark fire the candle
>> 1. (I) unplugged the plug.
2. Do not use the electric fan, use a paper fan instead.
2. Do not use the electric fan, use a paper fan instead.
3. Turn off everything electric after use.
4. If you're cold, get behind the covers.
5. If it's dark, light a candle.
4. If you're cold, get behind the covers.
5. If it's dark, light a candle.
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