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작성자 : seo***   ·   2015-06-11

Today's Topic : MERS

All Koreans are scared about MERS. MERS came from the Middle East, and It
diffuses by touched or spit splashed by the MERS Patient. If you don't get MERS,
you have to wash your feet and hands oftenly, don't go to too crowded places,
and wear the masks for MERS. But if you have a cold, dyspnoea, or fever, don't even go to the hospital just call the Public Health. Its incubation is 2-14
days, and if you are okay after the 2 weeks, you are not in MERS. There is
10 dead because of MERS, 122 Confirmed cases, and 955 people that are now
free from isolation. Our Deagu is not in a dangerous Locations so we're not
actually so keen for that. But still we have to becareful, so we check the temperature every morning at school. I hope the MERS disappier on this land soon.

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All Koreans are scared about MERS. MERS came from the Middle East, and It diffuses by touch or spit splashed by the MERS patient. If you don't have MERS, you have to wash your feet and hands often, don't go to too crowded places, and wear a mask for MERS. But if you have a cold, dyspnoea, or fever, don't even go to the hospital just call the Public Health authority. Its incubation is 2-14 days, and if you are okay after the 2 weeks, you are free from MERS. 10 people died from MERS virus, 122 confirmed cases, and 955 people that are now free from isolation. Our Deagu is out of danger so we're not actually so aware but still we have to be careful. We check our body temperature every morning in school. I hope the MERS will soon disappear.

Note:
*by touch
*There is no such word as oftenly, only often.
*authority - an official group with the power to control a particular public service
*out of danger - no longer in danger

Sarah, take note of the corrections made in your composition. Thank you for the information about MERS. Be careful and always be aware. Enjoy your weekend! :)

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