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My homework(To teacher Anna)

작성자 : gae***   ·   2015-06-11

My homework: Write a dialog.(Has to be!!)

Homework:
Judy and Maria are talking.

Judy: Hi, Maria.
Maria: Oh, hi Judy.
Judy: What are you doing?
Maria: I am painting my room.
Judy: Why?
Maria: To make my room look more pretty, of coures.
Judy: Are you painting a bird?
Maria: Yes I am. But it's really hard.
Judy: Do you want to come to my house and rook at my room? My room has many birds. Mabey you will get ideas for drawing your bird.
Maria: Oh, really? I really wanted to see your room!!
Judy: Of coures!!
Maria: Thank you, Judy!!
Judy: Your always welcom!! Now, let's start moving. My house is really far frome here!!

So they went walking.

Maria: Hew!! I never thaght that your house was so far frome my house!!
Judy: They are!!
Maria: I'm tiared.
Judy: Me, too.
Maria: I'm really hot!!

Finaly, they arrived at Judy's house.

Judy: Maria, this is our house.
Maria: Wow, It's amazing!! It's big and everything!! I really like this house!!I whish I live here.
Judy: Excuseme, Maria. Let's go inside.
Maria: Oh, wow.
Judy: Come!! This is my room. Well, I'm sorry that it's kind of a messy.
Maria: If you call this 'messy', then what's my room? Out of care??
Judy: No, it's not. It's 'clean'. anyway, let's have snacks and look what you whish.

They whached Judy's house.

Maria: Judy, I'm afraid I have to go now.
Judy: Oh... really? What a shame. Do you remember the way that we had come?
Maria: Yes, I do.
Judy: Bye~ See you tomarrow~~
Maria: Bye~~~

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My homework: Write a dialog.(Has to be!!)

Homework:
Judy and Maria are talking.

Judy: Hi, Maria.
Maria: Oh, hi Judy.
Judy: What are you doing?
Maria: I am painting my room.
Judy: Why?
Maria: To make my room look prettier, of course.
Judy: Are you painting a bird?
Maria: Yes I am. But it's really hard.
Judy: Do you want to come to my house and look at my room? My room has many birds. Maybe you will get ideas for drawing your bird.
Maria: Oh, really? I really wanted to see your room!!
Judy: Of course!!
Maria: Thank you, Judy!!
Judy: You're always welcome!! Now, let's start moving. My house is really far from here!!

So they went walking.

Maria: Phew!! I never thought that your house was so far from my house!!
Judy: It is!!
Maria: I'm tired.
Judy: Me, too.
Maria: I'm feel hot!!

Finally, they arrived at Judy's house.

Judy: Maria, this is our house.
Maria: Wow, It's amazing!! It's big and everything!! I really like this house!!I wish I live here.
Judy: Excuse me, Maria. Let's go inside.
Maria: Oh, wow.
Judy: Come!! This is my room. Well, I'm sorry that it's kind of a messy.
Maria: If you call this 'messy', then what's my room? Dirty? Out of care??
 (What do you mean by out of care?)
Judy: No, it's not. It's 'clean'. Anyway, let's have some snacks and look what you wish.

Judy showed Maria around her house.

Maria: Judy, I'm afraid I have to go now.
Judy: Oh... really? What a shame. Do you remember the way that we took?
Maria: Yes, I do.
Judy: Bye~ See you tomorrow~~
Maria: Bye~~~
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